like the name says LOL, i like the way you draw salamence, and the vore was good, but u might want to down it on the stomach insides, those lines take away the "vision"of the inside of the stomach and make it different. i like the ways the comic flows, starting with the plot, then the climax, and ending with a conclusion. not bad of a background, though your spelling and word placement could use some help. though in all your art that i've seen your wording didn't really matter. however, i'd like to see your logo not on the main image. so in all i'd say you did very well. (good job)